RED ROSE KILLER (PART-1)

Ye pyar bhari dardnak khahani h us shaks ki jo na apne sacche pyar ki talash me ab bhi bhatak rha h.......

khahani suru hoti h college life se jahan dosti,pyar,mohabbat aur masti sb chalti h

ye khani h sagar aur sapna ki.

sagar aur sapna ek hi class me padhne wale acche chhatra the.sagar ka sbse khas dost sahil jo dosti ka ek

misal tha wo v undono k sath hi padhta tha.sagar sapna aur sahil hamesa har chij me awwal aate the.lekin sahil sagar sapna se kuch hatkar tha.use apne batch me sagar k siva kisi se koi mtlb ni tha.lekin whi sagar dil ka dilwala aur mastana ladka tha.sagar ko kisi se pyar ho gya,yani wo jis dil se khud ko dilwala kehta tha wo wo dil kisi ko de chuka tha.us acchi aur khusnsib ladki ka naam usi ki sabse khas aur acchi dost sapna thi.sagar ye baat sapna k samne ijhar krna chahta tha lkin ijhar kr ni pata tha.ek din sagar ne khud me himmat jga k is pyar ka ijahar kiya.aur whi sapna ne uske pyar ko kbul kiya.iske baad suru silsila-ae-ishq ka safarnama!wahi phone call,sms,ghumna-firna mauj masti.ye silsila chalta rha tvi exam najdik aa gya.sagar k gharwalo ko sagar aur sapna k bare me bahar k kuch logo se pta chal gya.sagar k gharwale sagar pe kafi gussa hue aur use apne padhai pe dhyan dene ko kha gya.sagar ko kya wo to pyar me andha ho chuka tha wo fir v ni mana.isi kal exam suru ho gya sagar ne ek-ek kr sare paper de diye.sagar ke gharwalo ko shaq hua ki sagar avi v ni sudhra h wo kafi paresan the sagar k is nasamjhi bhari harkato se.unhone sagar k sbse ajij dost sahil ko bulwaya.aur jab sahil sagar k ghar aaya to sagar ki gharwale sahil se sagar aur sapna k bre me puchna suru kiya.sahil ne v sbkch sach-sach bta diya.aakhir wo v sagar ko insb musibat me nhi dekhna chahta tha.ye sb baate sunkar sagar ki maa sapna k ghar kuch baato ka pta lgane gyi.sagar ki maa jab wahan se wapas aayi to sagar pe kafi gussa hui aur use sapna ko bhulne k lye kha gya.aur sagar ko kuch din ke lye uski mausi ke yahan use ghumne k lye bhej diya gya.sagar to chala gya aur wo apne pyar ko bhulane ki kosis kr rha tha lkin kya kvi pehla pyar itni aasani bhulaya ja skta h kvi ni.lekin sagar majbur tha qki sagar k samne uske gharwale v h aur uska pehla pyar bhi.magar sagar ko kisi ek ko chunna tha.lekin sagar ne apne dil ko sambhala aur apne gharwalo ko chuna aur kha.....MAA-BAAP HAI TO JAHAN H.

                          AFTER 2 MONTHS LATER

sagar ke exam ka result aane wala tha sagar 2 mahine baad apne ghar wapas aaya.agle hi din sagar ka result aaya.sagar ne sabse pehle sahil ka result check kiya to sahil 85% se pass hua wahin sagar bhi 82.6% se pass hua!aur sagar ye khusi lekar ghar gya.gharwale ye khabar sunkar kafi khush the.sagar ye khuskhbarri leke ke sahil k yahan jane k lye apne ghar se bike le ke nikla.tvi use raste me ek aisa khanjar mila jo uske dil pe lge ghao ko khured diya.matlab ki use uski sapna se mulakat ho gyi.aur kuch samay tak wo dono ek dusre ko dekhte reh gye.tvi accahanak samne se aa rahi ek gadi ne sagar ko takkar marr diya.aur sagar whi gir pra aur wo buri tarah ghayal ho chuka tha.aur dard se krah rha tha.tvi wahan sirf wahan sapna maojud thi.sapna ne tvi kisi trah kch logo ki madad se use uthakar bagal k ek hospital me le gyi.sapna use jis hospital me sagar ko le gyi us hospital k sare member aur doctor sagar ko pehchante the qki wo sagar k family doctor the.islye bina kisi trah ke baat-vichar k turant sagar ka illaj suru kiya gya.sagar ko 5 ghante baad hosh aaya tvi doctor bta rhe the sagar jab behosh tha to wo sirf apni maa aur sapna ka naam le rha tha.ye sapna kaun h ye baat sunkar sapna rote hue bahar chali gyi.

Magar ye to sach kha h kisi ne............TRUE LOVE NEVER DIE.................

aur sagar ke hosh me aane ke baad jb usne apne samne sapna ko dekha to uska bhula bisra pyar wapas laut aaya.isse pehle ki ye baat aage badhti ki sagar ne hospital k sare member aur sapna ko ghar inform krne k lye mna kiya.lekin fir sagar ne soch-samajh k khud se apne ghar call kiya aur kha mjhe aane me der hogi ya aaj mai apne dost sahil k yahan hi rukunga jis se gharwalw paresan na ho.sagar ne khud ko sambhalte hue sahil k yahan jane ko nikla.sapna to sach me sapna hai.wo iss haal me sagar ko akele kaise chodh deti.sapna ne sagar ko apne ghar le gyi.wahan kuch der rehne k baad sagar sahil k o bulaya aur uske wo wahan se sahil k yahan chala gya.sahil k gharwale aur sahil uski halat dekh kar hairan reh gye.sagar ko itna sb kuch hone k baad v sagar khush tha use 2-2 khusi mili jo mila tha.sagar pehle apne yaar ko gale lagate hue uska aur uske gharwalo ka muh mitha kiya.fir sahil ne sagar ko bina btaye sagar k ghar inform kr diya.kuch der baad  sagar k gharwale v aa gye.kehte h jab bete ko chott lagti

                            AFTER 3 DAYS LATER

ye sab baate khtm v ni hui thi tvi ek aur acchi khabar aa gyi.sagar ka sapna mera matlab wo sapna ni jo uski jaan h wo sapna jise wo khuli aankho me dekha krta tha.wo AIEEE me acche rank se pass ho gya aur use acche khase scholarship v mili..

lekin SAGAR fir se pyar ki raho me chal diya.

aur sagar ne ye ye baat sapna ko btane k lye uske ghar pahucha wahan jakar dekha uski sapna zindagi aur maut se ladd rhi thi.sagar ne uske gharwalo se uske  bimari k bre me sari baat pucha.aur sapna ko city k sbse acche doctor k pass le gya jahan uska bimari ki puri baat pta chala.doctor ne sagar aur sapna k gharwalo se kha sapna ko brain tumer h!ye baat sunkar sagar ko maano ki pairo tale zameen khisak gyi.aur wo gamo k ek samunder me beh gya.

BUT ONES AGAIN......TRUE LOVE NEVER DIE.................!!!!

Doctor ne ye v kha uska illaj sambhav h.lekin isme kafi kharch hoga yhi karib 1-1.50 lakh.sagar k samne uska carrier aur pyar dono tha ye ghari uske lye kafi muskil bhari thi.sagar ne apna addmission na kra k scholarship ki mili rupee ko usne sapna k ilaj me lga diya..aur doctor se kha ise kuch ni hona chaiye.tvi sapna k gharwalo ne sagar se kha beta tm ek farista ho mai tmhe smjh ni payi mai tmhra ye ahesan kaise chukaoga.

tvi sagar ne kha..DUNIYA ME KUCH CHIJO KA KOI AEHSAN NHI HOTA BS INSAN KO RISHTE KI AEHMIYAT SAMJHNI CHAIYE...............

Kuch din baad sagar thik hone lgi aur sagar se baat v krni lgi.whi fir  sapna k gharwalo ko lga sapna sagar k sath khush rhegi q na indono ko rishto k bandhan me bandh diya jaye.

agle din sagar k papa ne sagar ko addmission k bre me pucha to wo fir juth pe juth bolta ja rha tha mjhe koi scholarship ni mili h ye sab fake result tha.

lekin sapna k gharwale jb undono ki rishte ki baat krne sagar k ghar pahuche to sari baate sagar k gharwalo ko pta lg gya lekin unhe gussa tha is baat ka ki sagar ne usse juth q bola aur garv tha is baat k lye ki sagar ne kisi k zindagi k khatir apna sb kuch luta diya.

fir v rishta hua sari baate 3-4 saal baad hone ko tay hua tb tk sagar kuch ban jaye pehle.......

                             SOME DAYS LATER

Sagar ko ek letter aaya jisme use NIMS UNIVERSITY me addmission order tha ye baat ko leker sb bhut khush the....

KEHTE HAI KI ACCHE LADKE KI KAMYABI CHARAN CHUMTI H............................

Thik yhi hua sagar ke sath 2 din baad sagar ka train tha.lekin isse pehle ye khabar usne sapna ko sunane gya aur wo ye khabar sunkar kafi khus hui...

                             TWO DAYS LATER

SAGAR NIMS jaipur k lye nikal pra!aur sagar k papa uska addmision kra k laut k aa gye.aur ab wo sochne lge ki unka beta ab ek kamyab ENGINEER bnega.lekin ye pyar v na!!!

sagar sapna se wahan se hmesa baat krta rehta tha.lekin ek din acchanak uski sapna se baate honi band ho gyi uska number bhi off ho gya sagar paresan sa rehne lga.lekin ab wo siwae intjar ka kr v kya sakta tha!!!!!!!!!!!                                                                                                                                                                                                             

                      24 MONTHS LATER

SAGAR apne dost sahil ke sath ghar wapas lauta.wo laut te hi apne gharwalo se sapna k bre me puchne ki kosis ki lkin koi jawaw ni mila use....

LEKIN SAGAR KO KYA PTA AB USKI SARI KHUSHI SAGAR ME BEHNE WALI H...........

SAGAR agle hi din sapna k ghar pahuch jahan pta chala ki ab wo yahan ni rehti h kuch mehne pehle hi wo yha se chali gyi......sagar ne uska pta lagane ki kafi kosis ki lekin kuch v pta ni chala. ab sagar ki haal dino-din bigarte ja rhi thi wo ab pehle jaisa ni rha kavi sharab to kvi cigarette aur sapna ki yaado me duba rehta tha.is baato uske frnd aur gharwale v pareshan the..gharwalo ne kisi trah use college bheja jahan wo khud ko is yaad se dur kr ske...lekin sayad hi aisa ho..college jane k baad v wo sharab aur cigarette k nashe me duba rehne lga jaise ab yhi iski zindagi ho na padhi na class sirf yaade aur nasha............

kuch din baad pta chala ki sagar ab college se khin chala gya h dhundne pe v wo ni mila kisi ko is baat se uske gharwalo ka bura haal ho gya...

Ha sagar chala gya apni sapna ko dhundhne ab sagar kha dhundh rha hoga sapna ko iske bare me kisi ko kuch ni pta.......dosto is khani ka climax avi baki h ab aap log intjar kro usdin ka jab sagar ko uski sapna mil jaye aur wo wapas aa jaye.............................

aap jra socho is pyar se kitne logo  ka dil tuta sagar ka jo haal hua hua hi aur sahil ko apna jigri yaar khona pra uske gharwale ko apne ghar ka eklauta chirag khona pra.

ab kya ab sagar ko uski sapna milegi?

 kya sagar wapas aayega?

kya sagar k gharwale bina sagar k reh payege?

in sab sawalo ka jawaw sayad hi kisi ko pta ho.aap apna jawaw in pate pe bhej skte hai

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                                                                                                                            RED ROSE KILLER

                                                                                                                       [ASHISH KUMAR AGNIHOTRI]

DIL NHI LGTA H MERA

Manjil h dur safar me hu akela,manjil h dur safar me hu akela,kya kru yaaro ab dil nhi lgta h mera,,,,,,,

kvi khawo me wo aa k chli jati h to kvi ishq-ae-lafz bol k trpa jati h,,,,,,,,,,
bina uske safar nhi katta mera kya kho yaaro ab dil nhi lgta h mera,,,,,,,,,,,,

uskiu ishq ne to nikkama kr diya h mjhe,,uske bina dil nhi lgta h mera,,,,,,,,,

na chain h na sukun na aaram na kam uske bina zindagi viran h mera,,,,,,,,,,,,,
uske bina dil nhi lgta h mera........

Safar Pyar ki…………………

dosto yeh ek sachi kahani hai ...yeh kahani toh meri nahi par maine use dekhkar mehsus ki hai aur koshish ki hai likhne ki.........

is kahani mein ek ladka hai jiska naam khistij hai aur ek ladki tanvi. khistij mumbai mein rehta hai aur tanvi pune me. we do ek dusre ko na jaanthe aur na kabhi pehle mile the. khistij 24 sal ka ladka hai aur tanvi 21 sal ki ladki. dono ki mulaqat, dosti aur pyar ek din ke safar mein hua aur ab jald dono ek hone wale h

khistij apne mama ke ghar chennai/madras ja raha tha aur tanvi apne nana ke ghar. kudrat ka khel to dekhiye dono ek hi coach mein aur ek hi compartment mein aamne samne baithe hai. dono ek hi cast ke hai,khistij apne chote bhai aur mom ke saath ja raha tha aur tanvi apne mom ke saath. waise sabhi ko pata jab do aurat mil jaye to gappe lagane suru ho jate hai aur yaha toh ek hi cast ke mil gaye the.......khistij ki mom aur tanvi ki mom baat kar rahe the.......baton-baton mein tanvi ki mom ne pucha ke ve madras kyu ja rahi hai,uspar khistij ki mom ne kaha apne bhai se milne aur khistij ke liye ladki pasand karne ke liye. yeh sunkar tanvi has padi....na jaane kyu....par yeh khistij se bardash na hui aur usne puchne ki gustaki ki, puchne par tanvi ne baat tal di aur dono baatein karna shuru ho gaye...........................

meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi

wo chahat hamesha tum hogi

ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main

na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi

baton baton mein din guzar gaya, sham ho gayi aur bhojan ka samay ho gaya tha, tab tanvi apne haath dhone ke liye gayi peeche peeche khistij bhi chal pada. jab dono ne haath dhoye tab khistij ko yaad aaya ki wo rumal bhool aaya yeh dekh kar tanvi ne apna rumal diya, us rumal par "TANVI" lika hua tha khistij ne yeh dekha aur apne paas hi rakh diya, tanvi ke mangne par khistij ne kaha yeh me apne paas tumhari yaad ke liye rakh raha hu..........yeh sunkar tanvi phir has padi.na jane us hasi mein kya tha ki khistij us hasi se pyaar kar baitha.....phir kahan khate samaye bhi unki baatein chal rahi thi..ab raat ho chuki thi dono ko neend nahi aa rahi thi toh phir unki baatein shuru ......na jane ve dono puri raat kya baat kar rahe the............agle din subah train chennai pahuchnewali thi dono ke mann mein ghabrahat mehsus ho rahi thi judaa hone ki..........

dono ko to pyar ho chuka that par izhar kaun kare? juda hote hote tanvi ne khistij ka mobile no le liya..............

do din beet gaye dono ki na mulaqat huyi na baat ..........phir tanvi ne khistij ko phone kiya aur phir milne chale gaye......tanvi ke mann me ek baat thi jo use mann hi mann kha rahi thi wo thi use ladki pasand aayi ke nahi......akhir mein usne puch liya aur usne keh diya nahi.........nahi sunkar uske dil ko jo khushi hui thi jo shayad ek pyar karnewala hi jaane.........

kai dino tak yahi silsila chalta raha aur aakhir ek din tanvi ne apne dil ki baat keh di aur khistij ne bhi use apne dil ki baat keh di. dono ke mann me ek dusre ke liye pyaar hai sunkar dono ko bahut khushi hui...........phir dona apne apne ghar chale aaye aur par we dono roz baatein kiya karte the magar chupke chupke .....

idhar khistij har ladki ko inkar karta raha aur tanvi shaadi se mana karti rahi..............ek din khistij ke papa pareshan hoi gaye aur us se puche kya tumhe koi ladki pasand hai to batao phir usne tanvi ka naam liya au khistij ki mom ne pucha wo safar wali......... kishtij jald se ha mila di. khistij ki mom ko bhi wo ladki pasand thi. na khistij ke parivaar ko aitraaz tha na tanvi ke parivaar ko aur ab kuch mehno mein unki shaadi hai.........

pyar agar aasani se mil jaye toh kitna acha hota hai...................

meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi

wo chahat hamesha tum hogi

ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main

na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi

pyaar kabhi kabhi aasani se mil hi jata hai... fir bhi oose jatan se samhalna hota hai..

achha laga jaan kar...dosto yeh ek sachi kahani hai ...yeh kahani toh meri nahi par maine use dekhkar mehsus ki hai aur koshish ki hai likhne ki.........

is kahani mein ek ladka hai jiska naam khistij hai aur ek ladki tanvi. khistij mumbai mein rehta hai aur tanvi pune me. we do ek dusre ko na jaanthe aur na kabhi pehle mile the. khistij 24 sal ka ladka hai aur tanvi 21 sal ki ladki. dono ki mulaqat, dosti aur pyar ek din ke safar mein hua aur ab jald dono ek hone wale h

khistij apne mama ke ghar chennai/madras ja raha tha aur tanvi apne nana ke ghar. kudrat ka khel to dekhiye dono ek hi coach mein aur ek hi compartment mein aamne samne baithe hai. dono ek hi cast ke hai,khistij apne chote bhai aur mom ke saath ja raha tha aur tanvi apne mom ke saath. waise sabhi ko pata jab do aurat mil jaye to gappe lagane suru ho jate hai aur yaha toh ek hi cast ke mil gaye the.......khistij ki mom aur tanvi ki mom baat kar rahe the.......baton-baton mein tanvi ki mom ne pucha ke ve madras kyu ja rahi hai,uspar khistij ki mom ne kaha apne bhai se milne aur khistij ke

meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi

wo chahat hamesha tum hogi

ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main

na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi

baton baton mein din guzar gaya, sham ho gayi aur bhojan ka samay ho gaya tha, tab tanvi apne haath dhone ke liye gayi peeche peeche khistij bhi chal pada. jab dono ne haath dhoye tab khistij ko yaad aaya ki wo rumal bhool aaya yeh dekh kar tanvi ne apna rumal diya, us rumal par "TANVI" lika hua tha khistij ne yeh dekha aur apne paas hi rakh diya, tanvi ke mangne par khistij ne kaha yeh me apne paas tumhari yaad ke liye rakh raha hu..........yeh sunkar tanvi phir has padi.na jane us hasi mein kya tha ki khistij us hasi se pyaar kar baitha.....phir kahan khate samaye bhi unki baatein chal rahi thi..ab raat ho chuki thi dono ko neend nahi aa rahi thi toh phir unki baatein shuru ......na jane ve dono puri raat kya baat kar rahe the............agle din subah train chennai pahuchnewali thi dono ke mann mein ghabrahat mehsus ho rahi thi judaa hone ki..........

dono ko to pyar ho chuka that par izhar kaun kare? juda hote hote tanvi ne khistij ka mobile no le liya..............

do din beet gaye dono ki na mulaqat huyi na baat ..........phir tanvi ne khistij ko phone kiya aur phir milne chale gaye......tanvi ke mann me ek baat thi jo use mann hi mann kha rahi thi wo thi use ladki pasand aayi ke nahi......akhir mein usne puch liya aur usne keh diya nahi.........nahi sunkar uske dil ko jo khushi hui thi jo shayad ek pyar karnewala hi jaane.........

kai dino tak yahi silsila chalta raha aur aakhir ek din tanvi ne apne dil ki baat keh di aur khistij ne bhi use apne dil ki baat keh di. dono ke mann me ek dusre ke liye pyaar hai sunkar dono ko bahut khushi hui...........phir dona apne apne ghar chale aaye aur par we dono roz baatein kiya karte the magar chupke chupke .....

idhar khistij har ladki ko inkar karta raha aur tanvi shaadi se mana karti rahi..............ek din khistij ke papa pareshan hoi gaye aur us se puche kya tumhe koi ladki pasand hai to batao phir usne tanvi ka naam liya au khistij ki mom ne pucha wo safar wali......... kishtij jald se ha mila di. khistij ki mom ko bhi wo ladki pasand thi. na khistij ke parivaar ko aitraaz tha na tanvi ke parivaar ko aur ab kuch mehno mein unki shaadi hai.........

pyar agar aasani se mil jaye toh kitna acha hota hai...................

meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi

wo chahat hamesha tum hogi

ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main

na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi

pyaar kabhi kabhi aasani se mil hi jata hai... fir bhi oose jatan se samhalna hota hai..

achha laga jaan kar...